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Here is a B+ Sample Response (It would have been an A if it had used the readings to support the feedback!): i think you got chapter 16
To learn more about effective peer reviewing, see Chapter 16 of The Kaplan Guide to Successful Writing.
Other than that, I felt that the breadth of your research was very solid. I loved seeing that you had turn of the century sources there! I felt that perhaps your point about Juniper being a tool rather than an object of veneration was well stated on the last page, but perhaps you could have it on that first page too? Just a thought! Otherwise, I think this is an info packed presentation. Why did you think it needed so much in it, rather than just the plain overview?
ok this is the person we will respond to
My big idea is the creation of a non-profit organizationt to assist single parents with affordable childcare. I have created powerpoint slides as a presentation to my audience at a local community center.